Monday, 1 June 2015

Persuasive Writing

To practise structuring and writing a persuasive argument correctly, students wrote about what animal they thought made the best pet.

Why Hamsters make good pets                       

Have you ever stood upon a pet shop and thought ‘’hmm what pet should i get?’’ well i finally found out  that a hamster is the best pet!.

My first reason is that if your kids don’t like veggies or fruit give it to your pet hamster they like fruits and veggies but make sure you wash it                                                      
                                                                                                                                        
 My second reason is that hamsters are in cages thats a good reason because if it poops on the carpet it will be hard to get it off.But make sure you put newspaper in the cages and if they wander around your house it would be hard to find it.
                         
My last reason is that there quiet and don’t eat that much which saves you money.


Hamsters like to eat veggies and fruit they are in little cages and don’t eat that much which saves you money so buy a hamster NOW!!!!!!


By Leon

WHY FISH MAKE THE BEST PET
Have you ever wondered what animal makes the best pet?Well thats why I’m here to tell you why fish makes the best pets.Here is some reasons why.

My first reason why fish make the best pet is because they are quiet so you don’t need to worry about upsetting the neighbours or if you’re like my family,waking up the baby.Trust me its so anoying when you have to do something with a baby crying in the bakeround.

My second reason why fish make the best pet because if your mum is like mine and does not let dirty things in the house then a fish is the best pet for you.They don’t bring in dirt or litter so your mum will be happy and you will be too.

My third reason why a fish make the best pet is they are well maintained and can be beautiful in any room in your house.If you’re a kid and your favourite colour is blue then you will love your fish because their water is blue and you can get blue fish too.

Now do you understand why fish make the best pet?They are quit,they don't bring in dirt or litter and lastly they a well maintained.so go out now and buy some fish.

By Ashlee

Why dogs make the best pets
Have you ever thought what is your favourite pet? What about a fluffy warm one I believe that dogs make the best pets.

Firstly, I think that dogs make the best pets because they are warm, kind and playful.They have soft fur and they are loyal and they can cuddle up with you.

Secondly, I think dogs make the best pets because they can do amazing tricks like fetch and can jump and catch a ball in the air.

finally, I think dogs make the best pets because they can protect you when a robber comes they can bark so the robber can’t get in.

That’s why I think that dogs make the best pets because they can protect you from robbers,they can do amazing tricks and they are warm and kind and playful.So go and buy a dog today!
By Keelyn.


Don’t you think a dog is a cute animal ?
I think a dog makes best pet in the world!
firstly dog makes the best pet because they’re playful.
If your dog is moaning and bored I will go to the dog and give a toy. They like to play  with tennis balls pigs ,ears and bones.
My next reason why dog make the best pet is because dogs chase their tail. They do not know why their tails wagging.
Finally dogs make the best pet because they are amazing at running and amazing at swimming. Also they exercise with you.
So this why I think dogs make good pet, they are playful, they chase their tails and they exercise with you.
By Jordan

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